After I wrote two commercial comments, I more realize myself.
The commercial comments are always talking about love, regard, kindness, etc.
When I searched for the ads, I was attracted by the touching story.
It is not so easy for me to keep myself objective.
This journal recalls me that I was taking the marketing lessons, learning the knowledge of commercials.
Therefore, I want to talk about the story, my story and ideal.
Is not so good, is it? The commercial comment shouldn’t include too many personal feelings. Although it is not a formal comment, I do have responsibility for every single stance that I wrote.
Or, maybe I asked myself that I have to write a comment like IELTS writing pattern, so I have this thought that “I have to be logic and object.” The original ideal that I want to improve my writing in English is because of IELTS. That’s why I asked myself using that pattern. So, with no personal feeling, I have to be objective. Besides, I find it is also good for reading. When I write an essay in English, I’m using the logic thinking of English. It helps me understand the article easier.
Let’s look at the topic: “transmit ideal”
My dream is making the world more peaceful, and full of joy and kindness.
To achieve my dream, I have to be an educator, a coach, a mentor, to teach people positive thinking and be kind. The people who are influenced by me will in many different fields. Maybe they are scientists, doctors, teachers, engineers. They affect positively on their professional field. So, in many aspects, this world will be better. My dream comes true! I don’t need to wait until being a rich woman or a teacher to teach people. I can do it RIGHT NOW. How? From the people who are around me. I tell them my ideal, and take the action to show them my mind.
Basic on this ideal, I use my social media to establish my personal image. Now I have a personal website, it is an extraordinary place to present my ideal to the audience. I can’t help myself to stop transmitting the ideal about love, peaceful, helping people and saving our environment. If I can make an effect from now, what do I wait for?